new for you--2

[Dano]

*recant*


[This message has been edited by Dano (edited December 13, 2001).]

[Hannibal]

I liked this one... I didn't see any racism, just a portrayal. But I dont know, it flowed, and
<BLOCKQUOTE><font size="1" face="Verdana, Arial">quote:</font><HR>but I'm not trying to impress
and I get a warm woman
every night.
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I liked that part really well.
I liked this poem, but not as well as some others you have written.


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As miserable as life may be I hold it pretty precious...

If I lose the light of the sun, I will write by candlelight, moonlight, no light. If I lose paper and ink, I wil write in blood on forgotten walls. I will write always, I will capture nights all over the world and bring them to you.
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[crazy a]

carwash people


they have nothing better to do,
I guess.

sometimes when the business is slow
I stand against the sandwich table
and look at them through
a foggy plastic window.
they're mostly blacks,
some Mexicans,
a few whites.
I can tell when it's a black guy
by the
BOOM BOOMBOOM
of his damn stereo.

every Saturday
they're out there
washing
waxing
vacuuming
hoping to score
a piece of ass for the night.

I prefer a rag
and a bucket of soapy water,
myself.
(to wash my car with,
not to screw.)
but I'm not trying to impress
and I get a warm woman
every night.

BOOM
BOOM.

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"what's jail?"
"everything's jail."

I call you up whenever I'm stoned
we chew the skin, choke on the bones....
I cut you in
c'mon let's go for a fall
--"Cut You In", Jerry Cantrell

[Branflakes]

I've never felt any racism from crazy, maybe I'm just missing it.

It was shocking to read that in the poem, but I see it as an observation of a situation, not an actual comment on certain races.

I like the poem, too.

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The ninja lesbian milk getter. aka dorkflakes.
Take the time to look up at the moon and stars.
I'm tired of the silent majority. Silence equals death.
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